Blog Post Week 4 Part 1
Websites that need Improving
The first link I accessed was MGBD Parts and services. I
chose this link because I was not really familiar with it. As soon as I was redirected,
I could not help but laugh. This is important to note because I could not take
this website seriously. If a consumer can not take a website seriously why
would they take their business there. Secondly
There are to many things going on in the first page. I do not know where to look
or find what I need because I am looking everywhere. Eventually I realized that
on the left-hand side was the menu. That is usually where customers go to move
on to the next page for what ever they need. The font is in red, and instead of
having a plain background it has a green car. The color choices make it really
hard to read what it says.
The second website I choose was jamilin.com. This one was a
little less funny but funny none the less. The format reminded me of someone
trying to sell a lifestyle. They used the same colors as they do during the programming
episodes on at four in the morning. This website is also covered in links. If
you randomly clicked somewhere on the page with your eyes closes chances are
you are going to click a link. Lastly the home page has way too many pictures
of Jami. If this was an attempt to make her self credible this is not the way.
The first thing is that Jami needs to clear up how many
words and pictures she has on her first page. One of quotes is to clear clutter,
and she should do the same for her website. There are many things a business
person wants to convey to its audience. By bombarding them with words and
pictures they don’t know where to read and most of the time don’t read most of
it. She has some link to other pages and all the excess information she has
should be put on those pages instead of the home one. This website also looks
like a giant advertisement for many things. I believe she is a woman of many
talents and there is nothing wrong with that. It would help her customers if
she had a website dedicated for each area she is selling. I see products for anti-aging,
I see real estate, and spiritual services. She can sell her self as a brand without
having to put everything one page.
Better Websites
The next website I clicked was Apple. I think most of the class
also decided to go to the apple website. Even though there was only a link, the
consumer knows that apple.com is going to redirect them to a website that sells
iphones and ipads. If apple was not as big as they are using the word apple has
the URL address might bring traffic. If another tech company named mango used mango.com
as a consumer we would think they are selling mangoes. This shows how well Apple
has done as a brand. Another great thing Apple has done with its website is
that as you scroll down their products are listed with a picture and a description
as you go. If you want to know about the product, you can click on the correct
link and get more information. If a user doesn’t want to scroll through the
images the menu for all their products are on the top listed clearly.
Another well designed website I visited was Toyota. Similar
to Apple’s website as you scrolled down there were different services and products
offered. Its screen layout was designed to be presented in a vertical format which
helps because users read from left to right. The only issue I encountered with
the website was that when I minimized the screen the format was thrown off and
not everything was clear to read like Apple’s. Other than that the color scheme
was consisted and complimented their Brand as Toyota. Everything was sleek and
well presented. I actually visit this website quite often because I bought a
car through them and I used their website before going to the actual site.
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